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Spoilers for "Robin Lightwalker's Adventures,Season 4: No home for heroes" ahead,don't read or participate if you don't want any sort of spoilers.












As the title would suggest,I am trying to come up with a rhyme.
A rhyme that will play a huge role in the next season of my ongoing show in text form.

It is a rhyme about heroes.

A rhyme of up to 8 verses,each consisting of either one sentense in two segments,or two seperate sentences.
I recently came up with the rhyme,but I don't have all the verses,except these:

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Many see his feats
Over the horrors he defeats

But when he needs to be saved
Many look at him like hes depraved

He fights for the light
The dark gives him no fright

But temptation is high and almost right
But should he turn as black as the night?

He glares down at evil with eyes of anger and ire
But if hes not careful, he shall fall into hell's fire.



He stands above all ranks,
and he never takes a thanks.


Heroes.They stand out and above the rest,
yet many don't have a chest adorned by a crest.


Heroes fight without rhyme or reason,
yet many would never expect treason.


But when the hero turns to his own kind,
they leave him behind.

And the world turns,
as the hero burns.


What I need your help for is to come up with the verses before the end,up to either 1 more,or 5 more sets,each describing something important about a hero,each in that rhyming sort of set up and each more cynical towards heroes then the next.

There won't be any reward for this and I am on a bit of a to tight leash to really do anything exceptional,so for those who want to help,if I pick your lines for this,all you get as a reward is the knowledge and satisfaction of having your words influencing the story and your words being part of the story.

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:iconundieknights:
UndieKnights Featured By Owner 2 days ago   Digital Artist
thank you for watching! :D
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RobinLightwalker Featured By Owner 2 days ago  Student Writer
No problem.
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rabbit-chainsaw Featured By Owner 5 days ago
Thank u for the fav bro but why?
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RobinLightwalker Featured By Owner 5 days ago  Student Writer
Hayir is part of your character roster,but so is he in the RLA character roster and I actually became a bit uncertain whitch look I was going for,even thou I have already laid down the description of the guy.
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rabbit-chainsaw Featured By Owner 5 days ago
The color helped you out? :3
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RobinLightwalker Featured By Owner 5 days ago  Student Writer
Yeah. A bit.
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enrico-ors-91 Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks for faving :thanks:
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RobinLightwalker Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2015  Student Writer
No problem.
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Werehorse89 Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks for the :+fav:! ^.^
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RobinLightwalker Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2015  Student Writer
No problem.
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